Write Tribe - 55 Fiction

Write Tribe

As if writing a 100 word story wasn't hard enough, here is the 55 Fiction challenge at Write Tribe using only 55 words.

We were to pick one genre, either Love or Mystery. I'm sure you can guess which one I picked being the hopeless romantic that I am.


Carrie leaned against the boat railing. When would this boring work cruise ever be over? Maybe she could jump overboard and swim for shore.

“Want to dance?” It was Rick, that hunk from Finance whom all the girls adored.

As Carrie floated across the deck in Rick’s arms, she wished this night would never end.

Comments

  1. From boredom to elation in 55 words. Well done! :-D

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    1. Thanks, Debbie. It was a challenge to write to such a small word limit.

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  2. This is awesome. She sure changed her tune in a quick hurry!!

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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    1. Thanks, Kathy. Yes, she was rather fickle that way!

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  3. A dream come true, eh? That's excellent.

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    1. Thanks so much RH. Appreciate you stopping by.

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  4. You very well managed in 55 describing a lot...great!

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  5. Oh so romantic - I wouldn't want the night to end too, Nicely done. I love the way you started this post - my thoughts exactly.

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  6. Good one! Nice transition of feelings in just 55 words :)

    - Vaisakh

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  7. Those boring office parties - wasn't it nice of Rick to liven it up? ;)

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  8. Dreamy ...so soo creamy Dreamy :D

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  9. It was magical! How pretty the sight must be...

    Richa

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  10. Great job on the 55...nice of Rick to brighten the mood...

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