Quentin and Steve
Today's Story a Day prompt is about a character having shame and then redeeming themselves. I managed to whip up a story on the fly. Fun to have these prompts to get the creative juices flowing. (Or maybe I'm just drooling thinking about dinner!)
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“Hey, you big Retard, this is our turf! Get lost!”
I turned to see Shaun and a gang of boys yelling and pushing
Quentin, my mentally challenged neighbour who was playing basketball in the schoolyard.
Quentin’s normally cheerful face paled and he dropped his ball.
He looked over at me as I was passing by, a hopeful look in
his eyes that said “Help me.” I shrugged and looked away.
Quentin turned and ran off, his gangly legs almost making
him fall a few times. I could hear him sniffling and hoped he was okay. I wanted to go to help Quentin and hoped the gang wouldn’t
notice me. I didn’t want to get drawn into anything.
“Steve, want to join us for a game?” Shaun called.
“Uh, no thanks. I have lots of homework.”
“Aw, come on, just one game,” Shaun coaxed. “Now that retard
is gone, we have the whole court to ourselves.”
“Okay, just one,” I said putting down my knapsack.
We threw a few hoops and I got it in a few times.
“Nice,” Shaun said with admiration. “Say, you’re a math
whiz, aren’t you? You sit next to me in grade 9 advanced math, right?”
“I like math. It’s my best subject.”
“I need some help with my homework. What do you say?”
“I’m kind of busy,” I said, my face growing hot.
“Oh, you can help me. Tell you what. If you do, you can be
in my new group that I’m starting. Only the coolest guys are allowed in. I’ll
even buy us some special jackets to wear.”
“Really?” I said, impressed that he would ask me. I’d never
seen myself as one of the cool guys.
“Sure,” he said giving that award winning smile of his that
all the girls liked. “Can you come over now and help me get ready for the test?”
“Okay,” I said, a feeling of excitement and dread going
through me.
Shaun let me in the house and I followed him to the basement
where he turned on his X box.
“If you want to do well on your test, you should turn that
off,” I suggested.
“You’re not my dad,” Shaun said rolling his eyes. “Say, I
wanted to make a deal with you. Since we sit close in class, can I look off
your paper during the test?”
I looked at him in surprise that he would ask such a thing.
“But that’s cheating.”
“Not really, if you know and the teacher doesn’t find out.”
“It’s wrong,” I said.
“Do you want into my group or not?” Shaun said. “Melissa
will think you’re hot. I see the way you look at her.”
I hesitated, sweat beading on my forehead.
“Yeh, sure but..”
“I need to know.”
“Okay,” I said, exhaling quickly. “I’ll do it.”
I returned home and saw Quentin out raking in his yard.
“Hi Quentin,” I said and Quentin turned away, pretending not
to hear me. I could tell he was hurt that I ignored him at the park.
That night I tossed and turned worrying about Quentin and
worrying about what I’d agreed to do for Shaun. Did I want to be in Shaun’s
group that much? Did Melissa’s approval matter?
The next morning on my walk to school, I passed Shaun and
the boys taunting Quentin again. Why couldn’t they leave the poor guy alone?
Melissa was also there watching, a worried look on her face. Quentin was clutching his CD player to his chest as it
blared “Jack and Jill went up the hill.”
“Turn that crap off!” Shaun yelled. “That’s not music.” He pushed
Quentin to the ground and the CD player fell and smashed into pieces.
“It’s broke!” Quentin cried. His face crumpled as he looked
at what was left of his CD player and he burst into tears.
“Leave him alone. He didn’t do anything to you,” I said.
“Go away. This isn’t your business,” Shaun said, a hostile
look on his face.
“Of course it is,” I said. “Stop bullying Quentin.
“Do you want to fight with me?” Shaun said, putting out his
fists.
“I want you to leave Quentin alone.”
“He’s just a stupid retard. He’s not important,” Shaun said.
Quentin flinched at the words.
“Of course he’s important. He’s a person who deserves
respect like anyone else. You think you’re so incredibly cool, Shaun, but you’re
not. You’re a bully, plain and simple.”
“Just for that, I’m not letting you join my group.”
“That’s okay. I didn’t want to join your lame group anyhow.
And by the way, our deal is off, too.”
Shaun looked at me in disgust.
“You are a loser, Steve. I’ve always thought you were.”
“You’re the loser, Shaun. You lie, cheat and bully people,”
I said, hoping he wouldn’t retaliate and hit me. Instead, he spat on the ground
and walked away without a word, his entourage following.
I stood there wondering what I should do now. If I took Quentin
home, I’d be late for school.
“I have a CD player you can have, Quentin,” I said as I
helped him up. “I’ll take you home and get it for you.” So I’d be a bit late.
At least it was only gym class first period.
“Thanks, Steve,” Quentin said.
I led Quentin away and hoped Shaun wouldn’t do anything. Behind
me, I could hear him laughing with his buddies.
“Wait up, Steve,” Melissa called out to me. She ran to catch
up with us.
"You should go back. The bell is going to ring any minute," I said to her.
"I don't care if I'm late. I'll explain what happened to Mr. Saunders and what you did to help Quentin.“I wanted to tell you that you’re not a loser. Shaun is. You did the right thing.”
“Thanks, Melissa,” I said, smiling, a warm feeling replacing
the cold dread I had felt only moments ago.
“Steve is my good friend,” Quentin said proudly to Melissa.
“And he’s my friend, too,” Melissa said to Quentin. “Aren’t
we lucky?”
wonderful…
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, ChocMA. Appreciate your continuing support. Means a lot.
DeleteHooray for Steve! Sometimes it's not easy to do the kind thing...
ReplyDeleteThanks, Shan. Yes, you're right. Many times I've wished I could have been braver and helped someone instead of being scared to get involved.
DeleteLovely story with a perfect ending.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Malcolm. Appreciate the encouragement.
Delete*applause* You certainly know how to capture feelings.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Loni.
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